Im zehnten Abschnitt hat sich ein kleiner Fehler eingeschlichen. Statt "[...] but you should make sure not to talk on a cycle way" sollte es doch sicher heißen "[...] but you should make sure not to walk on a cycle way".
To the "make-eye-contact-thing" I have to endorse that you should make eye contact while speaking to someone, but you should not stare. It's perfectly fine to shortly look somewhere else especially when you're dicussing something in sight (like a map, something on the computer, a car, etc.) you might switch between eye contact and the object discussed.